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lil van0
05-22-2007, 03:10 PM
Chapter 7: The book Reintroduced
Jamie is in a cold, stone room resembling a kitchen from the 1840s. Spotting an icebox, she goes to see what's inside, she didn't eat anything since the night before. Opening the elegantly carved door, Jamie spots...a preserved human head! She looked at the head, which wasn't really preserved because it's been in an icebox for 100 years, and just screamed. Loudly. Flipping to a page, carved on the skull, she sees a story about this dead woman...
Linda Aredysach
34 years of age
married
6 children
throat cut, stabbed in the back in 5 places, then decapitated
Jamie read the 'bios' of every victim this sadistic 'robert' did to them, mostly women.
Chapter 8: Investigation
Jamie decides to check out the hallway she first passed. Checking to see if anything was out there, she opens the door a peep. Slowly, the door creaks and opens a bit. Nothing there. Slowly creeping out to the stone hallways, Jamie actually notices small candelabras hooked to the wall. With a lighter she took from the small, red bucket she had with her, the candelabras were lit, and she could see. Entering the first room to her right, she notices this was like some hotel. With torture devices. This room contained a bed with an axe at the top. Quickly she closed the door. The opposite door had a rotting corpse that was a skeleton with bags of rotting flesh in some places. The room was empty for the corpse and its eaters. All of the rooms were like that, with torture devices and emptyness. She returns to the corridor but this to time takes the door to the right. And so, she enters a huge warehouse of sorts.
Chapter 9: The Warehouse
This 'warehouse' was just full of boxes, which smelled. Like corpse. After further investigation, Jamie finds herself in front of a staircase. Taking it up first, she ends up in an old room which contained parchment, a few feathers, an evaporated ink bottle. Oh, and a skeleton chained to a chair. The 'murder' of the children that happened here wasn't all that happened in this murderous place. She guessed, because of the elegency ofthis room was erm...higfher, that the skeleton was trhe sadistic Robert...

You know the drill, stay tuned tomorrow!!!!

Red Hot
05-22-2007, 03:29 PM
I wanted to eat dinner but now I am afraid to open my fridge!
This is one very creative and bone chilling story, sweet pea!!!

lil van0
05-22-2007, 05:54 PM
I wanted to eat dinner but now I am afraid to open my fridge!
This is one very creative and bone chilling story, sweet pea!!!

Why thank ya'll!(I may live in Florida, but I'm from New York...Why was that type all Southern(y)?):confused::D:p

lil van0
05-22-2007, 05:54 PM
Sorry to starve ya like that Red..:(

Red Hot
05-23-2007, 03:01 AM
I was being cute there, Lil Van0! Hehe - I ate dinner, don't fret!

lil van0
05-23-2007, 05:47 PM
oki then lol powa!!!!!

...well....yea...weird...thank god you ate dinner then!

lil van0
05-25-2007, 04:51 PM
like yer new pic, matey!

Red Hot
05-26-2007, 05:14 PM
Thanks, lil vanO - I love this character in Pirates!

lil van0
05-26-2007, 06:03 PM
cha..


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Red Hot
05-27-2007, 02:09 PM
cha..


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Cha cha cha - shall we dance? :D

lil van0
05-27-2007, 06:54 PM
uh.. sure, why not? I have nothing else to do :P

lil van0
05-27-2007, 06:55 PM
wait, i'm thirsty...*drinks stuff* oki NOW I'm ready :d

lil van0
05-27-2007, 06:56 PM
Red, didja see the new pirates movie?

raym
06-12-2007, 02:58 PM
You should make this into a book.

How many chapters will this story have?

Keep it up!

:)

lil van0
06-15-2007, 08:18 PM
You should make this into a book.

How many chapters will this story have?

Keep it up!

:)

Well, I put it up to 12 already released chapters, and so far the first episode of the new 'book', Jamie: Darkness Hunter is also available, and ideas for the second episode are reeling in my little head now.Thanks so much for the comments all! none are mean thank the lord!:D:D:D