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05-21-2007, 03:08 PM
...nothing. Jamie saw nothing at all. as soon as she opened that door, all the noises of evil, death, and pain went away. In the fetal position, Jamie entered a sort of trance that was broken 3 hours later, when the phone rang. Jamie woke up disoriented. The phone kept on ringing. She was too dizzy to stand, so the phone eventually stopped ringing.
Chapter 4: The Discovery
Day 5. 0954 hours. almost 10 PM. Jamie was working in the garage for the first time since she moved in. Her car had issues, so she went on to fix it. As this girl was going to get a coke from the table she put it on, Jamie noticed something...inconspicuous. The garage had a few wooden floor sections. One of them was a bit weak for some strange reason. After a few hacks at it with an old, rusty crowbar, the old, rotten floorboard gave way and broke in half to reveal a dark space below her. After prying off the other floorboards, Jamie seemed to find out she had discovered something very peculiar in a house like this. Something like this should not be in these houses. what Jamie had discovered...was a secret passageway.
Chapter 5: The Passageway
Collecting and obtaining all light sources in her house, Jamie sets off. She stumbles onto a narrow corridor with 5 doors on each side until it abruptly ended, or did it? Putting a lantern on the side of both walls, she sets off the find out what's on the end. What she finds, suprises her so much, she falls on the floor. A T-turn leads her down two sections, the left one to an old stairway going downwards, and a very long corridor that seems to end with 2 doors. she decides to go down those old, rotting, rickety stairs. The stairs seem to take this petrified young teenager to her death, it going so low. Finally, after what deemed to be an hour of climbing stairs that would break with a small sigh, Jamie Paterson finally gets to the bottom of all this. She enters a lobby that leads to an operating room. All the doors are locked. she lights a lamp and starts to read an old-looking book on a nearby wooden table.
Chapter 6: The book
Day 6. 0107 hours. Nearly 3 hours alone int his filthy darkness Jamie has been. Finding that book could finally solve...all of this. It was a reccollection of letters...
November 1, 1844
I had recently killed a woman coming from her home yesterday. Her organs are awaiting your payment and your works.
-Robert
November 23,1845
Robert, this 'womans' organs have not arrived yet. It ha sbeen more than 1 YEAR, I say, what is keeping you?
-Mattson
November 24,1845
Please forgive my lack of work, all this time I was in prison. Life sentence, but I escaped, sir. Do not worry your little head, my lord, the shipment has been placed and ready to go. It should be at your porch by...the 26, I believe. With all due respect, Robe-. Jamie hears a noise. Behind the OR. She tries to find a key but no luck. The only way through is the stairs. Whatever is in the OR is trying to get to her. Jamie, with the book, goes up the stairs. Racing throught the hallway she did not go through, she enters the left door and locks it. She now, is safe.
Stay tuned for chapters 7-9!:cool:
Chapter 4: The Discovery
Day 5. 0954 hours. almost 10 PM. Jamie was working in the garage for the first time since she moved in. Her car had issues, so she went on to fix it. As this girl was going to get a coke from the table she put it on, Jamie noticed something...inconspicuous. The garage had a few wooden floor sections. One of them was a bit weak for some strange reason. After a few hacks at it with an old, rusty crowbar, the old, rotten floorboard gave way and broke in half to reveal a dark space below her. After prying off the other floorboards, Jamie seemed to find out she had discovered something very peculiar in a house like this. Something like this should not be in these houses. what Jamie had discovered...was a secret passageway.
Chapter 5: The Passageway
Collecting and obtaining all light sources in her house, Jamie sets off. She stumbles onto a narrow corridor with 5 doors on each side until it abruptly ended, or did it? Putting a lantern on the side of both walls, she sets off the find out what's on the end. What she finds, suprises her so much, she falls on the floor. A T-turn leads her down two sections, the left one to an old stairway going downwards, and a very long corridor that seems to end with 2 doors. she decides to go down those old, rotting, rickety stairs. The stairs seem to take this petrified young teenager to her death, it going so low. Finally, after what deemed to be an hour of climbing stairs that would break with a small sigh, Jamie Paterson finally gets to the bottom of all this. She enters a lobby that leads to an operating room. All the doors are locked. she lights a lamp and starts to read an old-looking book on a nearby wooden table.
Chapter 6: The book
Day 6. 0107 hours. Nearly 3 hours alone int his filthy darkness Jamie has been. Finding that book could finally solve...all of this. It was a reccollection of letters...
November 1, 1844
I had recently killed a woman coming from her home yesterday. Her organs are awaiting your payment and your works.
-Robert
November 23,1845
Robert, this 'womans' organs have not arrived yet. It ha sbeen more than 1 YEAR, I say, what is keeping you?
-Mattson
November 24,1845
Please forgive my lack of work, all this time I was in prison. Life sentence, but I escaped, sir. Do not worry your little head, my lord, the shipment has been placed and ready to go. It should be at your porch by...the 26, I believe. With all due respect, Robe-. Jamie hears a noise. Behind the OR. She tries to find a key but no luck. The only way through is the stairs. Whatever is in the OR is trying to get to her. Jamie, with the book, goes up the stairs. Racing throught the hallway she did not go through, she enters the left door and locks it. She now, is safe.
Stay tuned for chapters 7-9!:cool: