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iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
06-14-2006, 04:13 PM
This is my most recent poem.

The Himalayas
Snow capped peaks reaching the heavens
Yet only just out of reach
Is the relief from pain and suffering

Finger tips stretch high
Only an inch or so from the sky
Or the end of it
Some may stretch for all eternity
Yet never reach the goal

Others take heed
Do a good deed
They learn from their mistake
Give more and seldom take

And one day they'll find
That they've grown an inch
To reach it, it's a sinch
But now...

But Now...the pain and the suffering has stretched the Earth
And the sky is yet another inch away.

Red Hot
06-15-2006, 03:27 PM
**wipes tears from eyes and claps**
This is your best poem yet, Screamy and you just described my day!

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
06-15-2006, 04:27 PM
Best? Really?
Thanks Red! You're sweet and you didn't deserve to be treated so badly. I didn't realize that he was such a schmuck! If I were you I'd spend a day or two crying my eyes out and then let it go.

I may not have been in the same situation before, but I've been through some bad times!

Red Hot
06-15-2006, 04:39 PM
Yes, really, Screamy. This is an excellent poem and I am so proud of you@
He made me out to be some monster.
He went on iscare all the time and read my poems and voted, all on his own. I will write one to end my pain in a few days after I stop crying. I depended on him to help me with resume faxing and he just quit - what kind of person does that?

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
06-16-2006, 11:15 AM
Thank you, Red.

Red Hot
06-16-2006, 11:28 AM
No, thank you, Screamy for sharing your talent with us!

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
06-16-2006, 01:58 PM
Haha, don't make me blush! LOL

Shadow Master
06-27-2006, 01:01 AM
Awesome! You did pretty well on this one!

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
06-27-2006, 12:03 PM
Thanks, Shadow.