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iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
04-02-2005, 06:34 PM
I wrote this cinquain for school:
Puddle
Different, quiet
Hiding, crying, dying
Slowly evaporating into air
Gone.
"Can a moral man maintain his moral code in an immoral world?"
-Mordechai(Uprising)
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
05-22-2005, 08:17 PM
Whoa, no one replied. Oh well.
"Shall they grow like onions with their heads in the ground!" -From "Fiddler On The Roof"
Red Hot
05-23-2005, 04:35 AM
Iscream, give us all a chance to reply. I was ill yesterday.
I adore the poem.
My tantalized spirit here blandly reposes, forgetting, or never regretting its roses.
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
05-23-2005, 02:13 PM
lol This poem is from like a kajillion months ago. lol I was lookinbg through old posts and just saw this one. Anyway, sorry you were sick. Are you better now?
"Shall they grow like onions with their heads in the ground!" -From "Fiddler On The Roof"
Red Hot
05-23-2005, 02:21 PM
Three for three, Urgh! Now I am dizzy from not seeing the original date on these!
My tantalized spirit here blandly reposes, forgetting, or never regretting its roses.
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
05-23-2005, 06:08 PM
lol
"Shall they grow like onions with their heads in the ground!" -From "Fiddler On The Roof"
Red Hot
05-23-2005, 06:11 PM
You funny little chick!
My tantalized spirit here blandly reposes, forgetting, or never regretting its roses.
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
05-23-2005, 06:37 PM
:D
"Shall they grow like onions with their heads in the ground!" -From "Fiddler On The Roof"
dyinangelc
05-24-2005, 01:02 PM
that was great
if i go to hell, the whole world is going to join me.
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
05-24-2005, 04:24 PM
Danke!
"Shall they grow like onions with their heads in the ground!" -From "Fiddler On The Roof"
dead letters
05-25-2005, 10:50 AM
I like them poem too, Iscream.
~ The way you love, have you got a name for it, cos I don't understand it...~
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
06-02-2005, 01:30 PM
Thanks dead
"As the Good Book says: If you spit in the air, it lands on your face!"
-Reb Tevye(Fiddler On The Roof)
ForYou2Notice
06-23-2005, 09:21 PM
i liked it, i had to do some for school too
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
07-01-2005, 11:03 AM
Yeah, it's fun.
"As the Good Book says: If you spit in the air, it lands on your face!"
-Reb Tevye(Fiddler On The Roof)
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