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iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
04-02-2005, 06:34 PM
I wrote this cinquain for school:

Puddle
Different, quiet
Hiding, crying, dying
Slowly evaporating into air
Gone.

"Can a moral man maintain his moral code in an immoral world?"
-Mordechai(Uprising)

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
05-22-2005, 08:17 PM
Whoa, no one replied. Oh well.

"Shall they grow like onions with their heads in the ground!" -From "Fiddler On The Roof"

Red Hot
05-23-2005, 04:35 AM
Iscream, give us all a chance to reply. I was ill yesterday.
I adore the poem.

My tantalized spirit here blandly reposes, forgetting, or never regretting its roses.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
05-23-2005, 02:13 PM
lol This poem is from like a kajillion months ago. lol I was lookinbg through old posts and just saw this one. Anyway, sorry you were sick. Are you better now?

"Shall they grow like onions with their heads in the ground!" -From "Fiddler On The Roof"

Red Hot
05-23-2005, 02:21 PM
Three for three, Urgh! Now I am dizzy from not seeing the original date on these!

My tantalized spirit here blandly reposes, forgetting, or never regretting its roses.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
05-23-2005, 06:08 PM
lol

"Shall they grow like onions with their heads in the ground!" -From "Fiddler On The Roof"

Red Hot
05-23-2005, 06:11 PM
You funny little chick!

My tantalized spirit here blandly reposes, forgetting, or never regretting its roses.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
05-23-2005, 06:37 PM
:D

"Shall they grow like onions with their heads in the ground!" -From "Fiddler On The Roof"

dyinangelc
05-24-2005, 01:02 PM
that was great

if i go to hell, the whole world is going to join me.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
05-24-2005, 04:24 PM
Danke!

"Shall they grow like onions with their heads in the ground!" -From "Fiddler On The Roof"

dead letters
05-25-2005, 10:50 AM
I like them poem too, Iscream.

~ The way you love, have you got a name for it, cos I don't understand it...~

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
06-02-2005, 01:30 PM
Thanks dead

"As the Good Book says: If you spit in the air, it lands on your face!"
-Reb Tevye(Fiddler On The Roof)

ForYou2Notice
06-23-2005, 09:21 PM
i liked it, i had to do some for school too

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
07-01-2005, 11:03 AM
Yeah, it's fun.

"As the Good Book says: If you spit in the air, it lands on your face!"
-Reb Tevye(Fiddler On The Roof)