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Red Hot
03-27-2005, 08:13 AM
He has no use for her now except to cook and clean,
he stays forever violent and mean.

He forgets her birthday, never giving her a card or a call,
she keeps sinking lower and lower, until she can't walk, but fall.

She found a friend who asked her if he can be her Mr. Right.
Seems he died and never returned, failing to re-find the light.

Broken promises keep invading her mind,
she wishes she could go back in time.

In time where she never fell for him,
or got caught up in his silly love grin.

No more attention he gives to her,
she is the past and nothing but a blur.

Back on her feet she rises from the ashes,
until those memories come back into her head and clashes.

Clashing and clashing like a bad movie,
she once thought he was groovy!

She was a means to and end and now she is re-born,
she is tired of crying every 'morn.

Her emails will stop and so will the gifts,
never feeling his kiss, upon her lips.

Close up the past and seal it shut,
she must make herself happy and get out of this rut.












But I spell you love and still you do not hear.

dead letters
03-27-2005, 11:29 AM
Wow, thats really good, I like it!!!! 5 stars *****

" Soulmates never die..."

Red Hot
03-27-2005, 06:37 PM
Thank you so much! It just flowed out of me like poison.

But I spell you love and still you do not hear.

demonchild1804
03-27-2005, 07:07 PM
you say you e-mail him in some, in others it sounds like he lives with you. Does he?

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.

Red Hot
03-28-2005, 04:30 AM
Poems are usually filled with different meanings and people. It is up to the reader to make their own reflection upon it.


But I spell you love and still you do not hear.

demonchild1804
03-28-2005, 12:21 PM
my reflection is dizzy.:D:D:D

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
03-30-2005, 07:39 PM
Wowwy! As usual!

"Can a moral man maintain his moral code in an immoral world." -Mordechai(Uprising)