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Red Hot
03-23-2005, 02:36 PM
My nose is all stuffed, I can not breathe,
all my healthy cells took a leave.

My nose is all red and hurts when I sneeze,
my chest is congested and I am startng to wheeze!

I have a fever and I am burning up,
I have the chills and I pour some tea in a cup.

What is sweeter, sugar or honey,
I have to go to work now because I need the money!

Sick all winter is what I am,
I now eat scrambled eggs and ham!





But I spell you love and still you do not hear.

darkknight
03-24-2005, 08:42 PM
thats funny

I'd bite my tongue, but the bloodbath is more than I could swallow.

Red Hot
03-25-2005, 05:45 AM
Thank you. It was meant to be and thanks for taking the time to comment.
I am not submitting poems here anymore. No one seems to comment on them as much.


But I spell you love and still you do not hear.

biggizmo54
03-25-2005, 04:25 PM
I am not much of a commentor, but don't stop....I like your poetry...I read them....and this one is funny...sorry u r sick...

ophidian_rising2000
...when the Gates of Hell open, only then will you see the "TRUE DRAGON"...

Red Hot
03-25-2005, 04:27 PM
Thanks biggizmo, how kind of you to say. I am a wee bit better today.

But I spell you love and still you do not hear.

demonchild1804
03-26-2005, 02:47 PM
i always post to u.

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.

Red Hot
03-26-2005, 03:20 PM
Yes, I know demon. U and biggizmo are wonderful!

But I spell you love and still you do not hear.

biggizmo54
03-26-2005, 04:38 PM
great...lookin' forward to post again...My story is a bit long, though...gotta cut it down without taking away the story...

ophidian_rising2000
...when the Gates of Hell open, only then will you see the "TRUE DRAGON"...

Red Hot
03-26-2005, 05:35 PM
I so can't wait for this story of yours!!

But I spell you love and still you do not hear.

demonchild1804
03-27-2005, 04:07 PM
i wanna read it too.

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
03-30-2005, 07:40 PM
Cute!

"Can a moral man maintain his moral code in an immoral world." -Mordechai(Uprising)

biggizmo54
04-01-2005, 03:10 AM
Tell me how I can put my story here for you...it is in word docs...I can't copy paste it here

ophidian_rising2000
...when the Gates of Hell open, only then will you see the "TRUE DRAGON"...

Red Hot
04-01-2005, 03:29 AM
I normally just type out my story but your fingers might fall off, biggizmo (I am joking as it is a fab story). Give Maximoto an email and ask him.

But I spell you love and still you do not hear.

biggizmo54
04-01-2005, 03:37 AM
what do you mean my fingers might fall off...?

ophidian_rising2000
...when the Gates of Hell open, only then will you see the "TRUE DRAGON"...

Red Hot
04-01-2005, 03:40 AM
It was a joke.....send in a clown to smack me in the head.....just email Maxiomoto.

But I spell you love and still you do not hear.

biggizmo54
04-01-2005, 03:44 AM
here is ur clown...[:0)]...but I won't smack you...

ophidian_rising2000
...when the Gates of Hell open, only then will you see the "TRUE DRAGON"...

Red Hot
04-01-2005, 06:23 AM
Thanks for the clown. I love clowns!

But I spell you love and still you do not hear.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
04-01-2005, 02:19 PM
lol

"Can a moral man maintain his moral code in an immoral world?"
-Mordechai(Uprising)