it's weird...

[fuzzypinkbunnies13]

ok. I don't get why, but all of the sudden, ever since yesterday, all of these poems are just literally pouring out of me. I must have written about ten since yesterday. I don't have names for them, except for one which Red helped me with, but that's frickin weird. Anyway, here's two more. Please tell me the honest truth, because if they're not good (which I don't think they are LoL), then I'm just gonna give it up... anyway, I wrote these two in third hour today... here they are:

I've grown tired or your mistakes,
I'm sorry but I must escape.
I cannot deal with this any longer,
Only your absence will make me stronger.
And if you do not let me leave,
Your heart and my blade will soon be weaved.
So please don't make me do this again,
Just close your eyes and count to ten...
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I'm stuck inside this empty hole,
This empty hole of death.
If I don't escape they'll take my soul,
I'll soon take my last breath.

So please just do me one last favor,
Before I say goodbye.
Promise me you'll be my savior,
And never ever die.

Sorry that was so long!



Some call it stalking. I call it LOVE!

[Red Hot]

Fuzzy,
I wrote 7 poems yesterday as the pain in my life was over whelming and I just wrote.
I love your poems and I am sure others on here do as well.
Please, do not give up writing. They are works of art from your heart, and if you stop, your pain will drop, into some closed cave of pain and then your mind will go insane.
Don't worry too much about titling them either.

[iScreamUscreamWeAllScream]

Evey writer/poet has days like this. I know I have!

"Can a moral man maintain his moral code in an immoral world?"
-Mordechai(Uprising)

[fuzzypinkbunnies13]

Well thank you guys. I really appreciate your support. PS Red, I liked that little poem you posted with the reply LoL! THANX!!!

Some call it stalking. I call it LOVE!

[Red Hot]

Glad I could help, fuzzy!

[Red Hot]

Glad I could help, fuzzy!