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demonchild1804
03-13-2005, 10:22 PM
My confusion rips me apart inside.
Piece by piece my worlds collide.
My walls collapse upon my head
from the weight of words you said.
The paint peels from screaming fights
that lasted through my sleepless nights.
In my bedroom I hid from you
using a razorblade to help me through.
Blackest clouds paint my skies.
Blue obscured by pointless lies.
A bitter memory lingers still
from all this pain you make me feel.
Anger becomes the halls I roam
in this broken place I call my home.

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.
Red Hot
03-14-2005, 04:28 AM
I hope you feel better, demon. This is a very dark and painful poem that is very intense and well written.
demonchild1804
03-22-2005, 12:17 PM
i don't feel any better but thanks for for hoping.

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.
Red Hot
03-22-2005, 12:23 PM
I am sorry demon. Can we help in any way?

But I spell you love and still you do not hear.
demonchild1804
03-23-2005, 12:48 PM
I dont know. There is so many problems right now. I don't know if anyone can help.

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.
Red Hot
03-23-2005, 01:00 PM
Well I am here for you if you need to chat, demon.

But I spell you love and still you do not hear.
darkknight
03-24-2005, 08:42 PM
thank you so very much and vise versa as well

I'd bite my tongue, but the bloodbath is more than I could swallow.
demonchild1804
03-26-2005, 02:46 PM
man I was under darkkights name AGAIN!! Sorry 4 the confusion

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.
Red Hot
03-26-2005, 03:21 PM
I guess you have twice the attention on here, demonchild - LOL!!! He he!!

But I spell you love and still you do not hear.
demonchild1804
03-27-2005, 04:00 PM
it gets confusing though, and sometimes i post without realizing I'm under his name.

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.
Red Hot
03-27-2005, 06:39 PM
You keep us on our toes - he he he!!!

But I spell you love and still you do not hear.