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Red Hot
03-12-2005, 01:10 PM
Rum in his belly that went to his brain,
he was on line to drive her insane.

Insane with fear that he thought was funny,
but it made her sick, to her tummy.

She ignored him at first and he left her alone,
thank God she did not give him the number, to her phone!

The more he drank the more dark he became,
he was on line to drive her insane.

He made fun of her posts, mixed with hidden meaning,
her eyes could not believe what they were reading!

She posted answers back to stop the attack, being all sweet and kind.
She was real scared and shaked with fear,
as he was drunk and out of his mind!

Peace there was for two days straight,
but how longer would it be to re-read his hate?

He goes on line to drive her insane, she wishes she never befriended this pain.
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
03-12-2005, 06:35 PM
That's cool!

"Can a moral man maintain his moral code in an immoral world?"
-Mordechai(Uprising)
Red Hot
03-12-2005, 07:00 PM
Thanks iScream but this is reality in my life.
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
03-12-2005, 09:15 PM
I'm sorry. But the poem's really good!

"Can a moral man maintain his moral code in an immoral world?"
-Mordechai(Uprising)
Red Hot
03-13-2005, 09:37 AM
Thank you again. When I am scared and in pain, I write to help me thru it.
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
03-13-2005, 10:41 AM
That's what I do!

"Can a moral man maintain his moral code in an immoral world?"
-Mordechai(Uprising)
Red Hot
03-13-2005, 11:40 AM
Yes, and I enjoy reading your poetry. Another is in the works soon.
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
03-13-2005, 02:21 PM
Thanks. Good! How many poems have you written? I have all of mine in a little booklet. Around 44. That's not much. But I've only started writing poetry around a year ago. One of my friends had over 400!

"Can a moral man maintain his moral code in an immoral world?"
-Mordechai(Uprising)
Red Hot
03-13-2005, 07:31 PM
I have no clue. I have been writing for years. I do it for friends/families for their birthdays. I submit alot of mine on another forum but since someone is stalking me out, I have to be careful now.
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
03-13-2005, 08:39 PM
Yikes! Good luck. I hope he leaves you alone soon.

"Can a moral man maintain his moral code in an immoral world?"
-Mordechai(Uprising)
Red Hot
03-14-2005, 04:25 AM
I hope so too.
biggizmo54
03-16-2005, 12:50 AM
Sweet...sad...but sweet...reminds me of the Pumpkin eater

ophidian_rising2000
...when the Gates of Hell open, only then will you see the "TRUE DRAGON"...
Red Hot
03-16-2005, 04:18 AM
Oh God, biggizmo, why did you write that?
biggizmo54
03-16-2005, 04:40 AM
reflecting back to a nusurey rhyme...didn't mean to take it out of context...good writing Red, it just took me back to yesteryears

ophidian_rising2000
...when the Gates of Hell open, only then will you see the "TRUE DRAGON"...
Red Hot
03-16-2005, 05:07 AM
What you wrote freaked me out - I am glad it was not as I thought.