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iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
03-02-2005, 07:00 PM
OMG, i FEEL LIKE SUCH A LOSER, I HAVE TO ASK PEOPLE TO READ MY FRIGGEN POEMS!? I THOUGHT PEOPLE LIKED ME :'(

SIE wurful in drei, zwei, ein...

schizoCuRsEgirl.erghh
03-03-2005, 02:29 AM
woah miss screamy- i read them all! course we like you...you make the most creative and amusing posts and poems, girl! calm down hinny!

*Do I wear you out
You must wonder why I'm relentless and all strung out
I'm consumed by the chill of solitary*

omen_flower

demonchild1804
03-03-2005, 11:52 AM
You shouldn't beg people to read your work. then they only reply out of guilt. If noone likes it try another approach. It's not that bad.

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
03-03-2005, 02:58 PM
Thanks schizo

biggizmo54
03-03-2005, 03:56 PM
say 'miss screamy' ten times real fast

ophidian_rising2000
...when the Gates of Hell open, only then will you see the "TRUE DRAGON"...

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
03-03-2005, 04:07 PM
lol

demonchild1804
03-03-2005, 04:30 PM
i've read ur poems and they aren't bad. I just didn't post because I wouldn't be a good judge of that style of poetry.

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
03-03-2005, 07:43 PM
Thanks.