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iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
02-23-2005, 02:20 PM
Okay I wrote this poem a few weeks ago, tell me if you like it! I hope I don't offend anyone, because this poem is about the Holocaust and it is in first person...
With the grasp of my arm
SS man tattooed a number
Not a human, but an animal
With no name
I'm a number, not worthy
of life in the eyes of Hitler
Chased through cold showers
Heads shaved
'Links, Reichts' Dr.Mengele shouts
Sent to temporary life, or instant death
Dead is my identity
Gone is my freedom
Over is my life.
SIE wurful in drei, zwei, ein...
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
02-23-2005, 05:54 PM
Anyone? Comments?
SIE wurful in drei, zwei, ein...
dead letters
02-24-2005, 05:53 AM
I have one....ahem.....i like it.
"We open the latch on the gate, of the hole that we call our home..."
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
02-24-2005, 01:54 PM
Thanks.
SIE wurful in drei, zwei, ein...
BLoOD
02-24-2005, 01:58 PM
Me to I like it
:)
keep going
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
02-24-2005, 03:02 PM
I have other ones about the Holocaust. I am obsessed with it. That all came from I think I was a Jew killed in the Holocaust in my past life. Anyone think I'm nutzo?
SIE wurful in drei, zwei, ein...
schizoCuRsEgirl.erghh
02-25-2005, 10:52 AM
NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEE! hello- im past life toppic poster. of course u aint nuttttttyyyyyyyy......lovin the poem too!!!
*"Oh yeah, girls take hearts and eat them, beware dudes".*
(Tom)
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iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
02-25-2005, 02:05 PM
Thanks a bunch, Schitz! (Do you mind if I call you Schitz? lol)
SIE wurful in drei, zwei, ein...
schizoCuRsEgirl.erghh
02-26-2005, 10:31 AM
of course not! thats what all my friends call me anyway (well, maybe!). after all....you are miss screamy to me soooo
*"Oh yeah, girls take hearts and eat them, beware dudes".*
(Tom)
omen_flower
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
02-26-2005, 02:27 PM
Cool!
SIE wurful in drei, zwei, ein...
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