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schizoCuRsEgirl.erghh
02-20-2005, 06:40 PM
she cleaned the hospitial
and i'd bleed to love her
cold and grey, plastic chairs
green shiny walls
mop by the entrance, bucket by her feet
i could sit and stare, eyes stripping her bare
her grave she's soon to meet
suburban home, washing line
flour dough, sticky and sour
clogging up her nails
i feel her spirit, i know she is mine
her blood soon to stain on her f**king rail
doorbell swing, clang and ring
the rip of her scream
tearing pleasure down my brain
i see the scene like a piece from a dream
another dirty, horror seeped lane
and i lick my lips at the jerk of her pain

*nunca pense que doliera el amor asi cuando se entierra en el medio de un no y un si es un dia ella y otro dia yo me estas dejando sin corazon y cero de razon*
omen_flower

Red Hot
02-20-2005, 08:31 PM
I lick my lips with you. Very creative poem.

schizoCuRsEgirl.erghh
02-21-2005, 05:57 AM
cheers! :)

*nunca pense que doliera el amor asi cuando se entierra en el medio de un no y un si es un dia ella y otro dia yo me estas dejando sin corazon y cero de razon*
omen_flower

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
02-21-2005, 08:20 AM
OoOo. That's good.

Black ominous clouds
Floating across the damp sky,
Bringing rain to Earth.

livingdeadgurl
02-21-2005, 07:06 PM
wow very interesting and inquisitive

Saying I'm just a little psycho is like calling a nine month pregnant woman a virgin......

schizoCuRsEgirl.erghh
02-22-2005, 12:50 PM
oh its so nice to be appreciated! sighhh.

*through the streets and on your own
almost lost, almost home
we'l be looking all we can
we'll be searching for the sulphur man*
omen_flower

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
02-22-2005, 03:05 PM
lol

SIE wurful drei, zwei, ein...

demonchild1804
02-22-2005, 08:13 PM
i really liked it!!!

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
02-22-2005, 09:17 PM
Ja

SIE wurful in drei, zwei, ein...

schizoCuRsEgirl.erghh
02-23-2005, 04:42 AM
wow demonchild, but you are like, the best poet ive ever read! yay the best poet ive ever read thought it was good!!! yay!!!

*through the streets and on your own
almost lost, almost home
we'l be looking all we can
we'll be searching for the sulphur man*
omen_flower

demonchild1804
02-23-2005, 01:39 PM
reminds me of my own work. makes me think of insanity and death, my favoritist things in the world!!!

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.

dyinangelc
02-23-2005, 01:40 PM
id have to say there are many ppl on this site who should be published in many different types of books.

if i go to hell, the whole world is going to join me.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
02-23-2005, 03:15 PM
No one likes me anymore!

SIE wurful in drei, zwei, ein...

livingdeadgurl
02-23-2005, 06:55 PM
i dont really know you but hey, screw it, i like ya:D

Saying I'm just a little psycho is like calling a nine month pregnant woman a virgin......

dead letters
02-24-2005, 06:56 AM
hmmmm.....very good....I like it a lot. Vey creative :-)

"We open the latch on the gate, of the hole that we call our home..."

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
02-24-2005, 02:53 PM
LOL, thanks livingdeadgurl!

SIE wurful in drei, zwei, ein...

schizoCuRsEgirl.erghh
02-25-2005, 11:45 AM
i like you miss screamy!
dead letters. i am truly happy you said that! hehe!


*"Oh yeah, girls take hearts and eat them, beware dudes".*
(Tom)
omen_flower

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
02-25-2005, 03:04 PM
Thank you!

SIE wurful in drei, zwei, ein...