Deportation

[iScreamUscreamWeAllScream]

Can anyone guess what this poem I wrote is about?
Being forced from their homes
Bringing all items carryable, only to be taken away.
Trying to survive, yet waiting for the sweet release of death
To be free of the torture life had bcome.

Tell me if this is any good!

Black ominous clouds
Floating across the damp sky,
Bringing rain to Earth.

[fuzzypinkbunnies13]

it sounds like some kid getting taken away or like someone going to jail or something. but it's good.

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[iScreamUscreamWeAllScream]

Close..it's about the Holocaust.

Black ominous clouds
Floating across the damp sky,
Bringing rain to Earth.

[demonchild1804]

i knew it!! I read alot about the Holocaust. I wrote this really good poem about it, but my teacher kept it.

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.

[iScreamUscreamWeAllScream]

I read a lot about the Holocaust as well. I've seen many movies about it and read many books. After a while I started thinking...what did the Jews believe anyway that made the Germans hate them so much. So I read up on Judaism, and now I'm hooked! I mostly believe Jewish customs, and I might even convert at some point.

Black ominous clouds
Floating across the damp sky,
Bringing rain to Earth.