Altar Angel

[demonchild1804]

Moonlight lingers on alters of stone.
Midnight breezes chill the bone.
Ancient ruins I call my home
as druid voices hover then roam.
Hidden realms of nightmares and dreams.
Serenity of night dispelled by screams.
The altar Angel lies beneath my blade.
Blood sacrifice Christian Gods forbade.
A crimson river from the Angel's breast
from age-old symbols carved upon her chest.
Whispered chants carry to Gods unseen.
Exhalting sins that leave the soul unclean.
Failing breath, she closes her eyes.
Harvested soul, the Angel dies.

I'll cut you just to taste you more.

[Red Hot]

Sensational!

[evillilbabe81450]

sure is

If you're gonna make a mistake, make it a big one.

[demonchild1804]

thank you, thank sooo much! i really liked it too. I used some new words and all!!


I'll cut you just to taste you more.

[schizoCuRsEgirl.erghh]

you got anything published yet? you really oughta!


*from behind these walls i hear your song, oh sweet words
the music you play lights up my world
the sweetest that i've heard
could it be i've been touched and turned, oh lord please
finally, finally things are changing*

[demonchild1804]

i'm published all over in the U.S. and somewhere in the U.K. through the International Library of Poetry, but I'm looking to be published elsewhere as well.

I'll cut you just to taste you more.

[dyinangelc]

good poem. i really liked it. i need to get back into writing my poetry again.