The Ripper

[demonchild1804]

Noone can stop me, I'm here alone
When I cut your flesh away from bone.
You can run but never hide
when I cut you open from inside.
Noone can save you, your god is dead
killed him first, cut off his head.
Watch my hands grab and hold
I'll choke you until your blood runs cold.
I'll cut your stomach wide apart,
stab your lungs, and cut out your heart.
My razors are fresh with sharpened tips
to stab your eyes and remove your lips.
Noone will hear your screams and cries.
Noone will care if a hooker dies.
I'll leave you a bloody mess on the floor.
I'm Jack the Tipper and you're my WHORE!


I'll cut you just to taste you more.

[thehalloweenqn]

Way cool! I like it



WITCHES DO IT IN CIRCLES!

TheHalloweenQn

[dead letters]

wow, did you write that yourself? It's damn good


you can run but you can't hide...it will get you someday.

[demonchild1804]

I write all my poems. I just glad people like them.

I'll cut you just to taste you more.

[dead letters]

i just don't like it, i love it, it's brilliant!!!!

you can run but you can't hide...it will get you someday.

[demonchild1804]

Thank you very much

I'll cut you just to taste you more.

[darkknight]

I love how you can carry such weight with those words.
It's amazing.

I'd bite my tongue, but the bloodbath is more than I could swallow.

[dyinangelc]

that was wonderful. do more with detail.

[demonchild1804]

i wrote that one while stuck in in-school-suspension.


Then the angels come dance with me, slice me up and set me free.

[iScreamUscreamWeAllScream]

Wow, that is reaally good.

Black ominous clouds
Floating across the damp sky,
Bringing rain to Earth.

[iScreamUscreamWeAllScream]

Read my signature, it's a haiku I wrote. Any good?

Black ominous clouds
Floating across the damp sky,
Bringing rain to Earth.

[demonchild1804]

I scream- i like it. but i don't work much with haiku, so don't know how it should sound.

I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.

[iScreamUscreamWeAllScream]

A haiku is suppose to have a certain amount of syllables in each line:
Line 1: 5 syllables
Line 2: 7 syllables
Line 3: 5 syllables

I learned this a long time ago, I'm surprised you don't know.

Black ominous clouds
Floating across the damp sky,
Bringing rain to Earth.

[demonchild1804]

oh i remember now, that was along time ago


I've got you where i want you now.On your knees I make you bow.
I killed your god and ate his face. Then took his body to my secret place.