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iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
10-14-2004, 10:51 AM
This is a poem I wrote today, it's pretty short, I'm going to try to think of an ending for it later on...

The Flower In The Wind
This little droopy flower
Above the ground it towers
It's pettles falling to the grass
as strong the wind may pass.

Tell me if you think it's good so far

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
10-18-2004, 12:39 PM
damn people, reply! lol

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dead letters
10-28-2004, 09:14 AM
wow, thats pretty good

you can run but you can't hide...it will get you someday.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
10-28-2004, 04:03 PM
Really? Thanks!

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kaos
10-28-2004, 05:55 PM
NOT BAD...NOT BAD AT ALL.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
10-28-2004, 09:01 PM
Thanks again Kaos! ;)

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dead letters
10-29-2004, 09:55 AM
lol, you must be pretty good at writing stories and poems ect.

you can run but you can't hide...it will get you someday.

iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
10-30-2004, 10:43 PM
I think so, lol

Blessed Be