View Full Version : a dumb haiku i wrote
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
10-24-2007, 05:42 PM
thought of this when i was riding the bus to school. the window was open and my hair was flying out of it. lol
Playful is the wind
That toys with my long tresses
Like carefree lovers
not even worth reading lol
Red Hot
10-25-2007, 07:18 AM
**giggles and then womps Screamy in the head**
I love it! What creativity! STOP saying things like "not worth reading" and "Dumb"!!
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
10-28-2007, 03:30 PM
*screamy falls off her chair then rubs her head* aaaaaiiii!
thank you...for the compliment. not the womp. lol
Red Hot
10-29-2007, 06:23 AM
How about a great big hug instead of a womp??
Mister_Creazil
10-30-2007, 10:00 AM
Well, it's rather good. =] It's not "dumb" or "not worth reading". No poem or story is not worth reading.
iScreamUscreamWeAllScream
10-30-2007, 01:59 PM
Thanks everyone! :D
and yes Red, a big hug is better!!
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