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lil van0
08-12-2007, 10:43 PM
She enters. Passing a gate opened by some humanoid Yitvernum. The gate was a wall sliced in half. It consisted of the bones and blood of those who had attempted to come out...alive. Jamie will join them. As this gory gate opens, blood pours out. So much blood has poured, it already has a dark red mark staining it. She enters, unfazed unlike the others, which makes her the character, not the others. They lead her, with out attacking, into a room...
The room of Dysfunction
A room with levers, knobs and several platforms floating in suspended animation. She presses one, and poop fills the room. She quickly turns a knob, and the room begins to fall apart. Narrowly missing part of the ceiling, she jumps on a button. Time goes foreward, and she looks at the room getting mutilated and horrified with things growing and and pictures of people dying. She awakens.
The room of Confusion
Jamie is staring at herself. Suddenly, her mother appears. Then her father. They both are chained and tied toghether. Her 'clone' picks up and axe. and goes to her mother. What are you doing? That is the thought that sprouted in to the minds of her 'parents' Jamie watches herself hacking them to death. Jamie runs toward their bodies. Jamie looks atight at Jamie. And pounces her. Jaime begins to pull out a gun and begins to fire. FLASH!
The room of Death
She opens her eyes. And sees every friend she's made getting horribly mutilated and killed. She desn't know what to do..

jeremy71
08-12-2007, 11:48 PM
Interesting series u got going on, hopefully u keep it up.... like i said b4 u ever come out w/ a book u let me no i'll make sure i get it on back order

Red Hot
08-13-2007, 06:22 AM
Wonderful!! **awaits for more**

lil van0
08-13-2007, 09:55 AM
i'll have 2 signed copies-one for you, and another for you to sell on ebay :P

Red Hot
08-13-2007, 10:07 AM
Ah ha ha - wise comment!!